This week, Year 4 has been exploring sound play in poetry, particularly onomatopoeia (sounds). We wrote a rhyming poem, using sound, about our school.
The Noisy School by Faryn B
The kids wake up - ping!
The school bells ring - ding!
The teacher goes "Aahhhh"
A kid jumps out - "Raaaa"!
The kids eat - munch
Students step on leaves - crunch
Cars drive past - zoom
Their engines blow up - boom!
Students in classrooms - chatter chatter
Students do paintings - splatter splatter
Silence again.
The Noisy Class by Scarlett A
The bus goes screech
A boy screams "Leach!!!"
School bells ring
School drums go cling
Noisy kids burps
and magpies chirp.
The Noisy School by Josephine S
The cat goes meow
The building site goes kapow!
The music room goes ting
while the students sing
The pool goes splash
and the builders' tools go crash
The puddles go splat
and the children sit on the mat.
The Noisy School by Ariya S
The children go chat
The food goes splat
The cars go zoom!
The flowers go bloom
The birds go tweet
The doors go screech
The pencils go crash
the cranes go smash!
Confused by Josie 4Vic
Sometimes I get so confused
To the point you feel used
It's so hard you see
Just to no be
CONFUSED
So you see it's hard to be
Normal
Or even formal
And then you will get embarrassed
And feel worried
Or even sorried!
And will feel like a monster and there is
a crazy confusing conflict:(
My Sister by Kenzie 4Vic
Sister are amiable
I am a big sister
Sister can be men en
Two terrific tisters shrough through
Every girl needs a special sister like you
Radiant like the sun, we always have fun
My Dog by Jaxan 4Vic
The dark dandy dog
was a happy adorable defending dog
that was daydreaming at daylight
In December while at the dog wash.
The Ham Limmerick by Eden 4Vic
There was a really old mam,
She really really liked ham,
She ate it all day long,
She liked to sing a song,
She had a very little lamb.
Fred the Fish by Eden 4Vic
Fred the freckled fish,
Formerly flipped over the fantastic wave for food
Fred fed his freshwater family fearless
As he fend’s off sharks from the family house door.
Angry Larry by Jack 4Vic
Red eyes burning flaming red hair
When he gets mad! He has a flare
In the eye which scares everyone around him
Two minutes later he turns into a humongous beast
Boom! bang! Bashing evey thing in site
Filling people with fright.
Mrs Julie Sands