The Year 3 students have been working on persuasive writing during Term 2. Our assessment was to: 'Write a persuasive text convincing Mr Stevens to recognise a significant celebration or commemoration at TMC'.
To practise, we decided to write a persuasive letter to the community, explaining why TMC Open Day is the best. We worked together to create the following text.
Mrs Martine Kramer and Mrs Julie Sands
TMC Open Day Is The Most Magnificent Celebration Around!
Don’t you agree that pink, teacup piggies and tiny, fluffy goats are adorable? It is vital that you come to Tamborine Mountain College’s Open Day to see these creatures for yourself. Not only does Open Day have gorgeous, baby animals, it also has delectable food and it’s a great way for the Tamborine Mountain community to gather.
First of all, I strongly believe that TMC Open Day is the most exceptional day in the Scenic Rim. The fact is, TMC Open Day has amazingly delicious food and drinks. Our Open Day has terrific cakes, awesome caramel-slices, the warmest, most majestic coffee and super, sweet slushies. Due to the delicious food and beverages, you must agree that TMC Open Day is superb.
Furthermore, it is imperative that you agree that TMC Open Day is definitely delightful for families because the community can come to visit our school and spend some lovely time together. Guests can talk to the lovely, intelligent teachers, students can show off their classy, new classrooms and we can show guests the luscious school grounds. Due to this community engagement, don’t you agree that TMC Open Day is the most magnificent open day in Australia?
Finally, it is vital you agree that TMC Open Day is undoubtedly incredible because of the excellent attractions. We have amazingly awesome animals and we have thrill-seeking rides. There are perfect, pink piggies, chirping, cheerful chickens, exhilarating rock-climbing and a giant, inflatable obstacle course. Due to these amazing activities, it’s definitely the best carnival in the entire state.
To conclude, I am absolutely certain that TMC Open Day is the best school carnival around. There are exciting rides, adorable animals and a cake stall full of delicious treats. It’s also a fantastic way for the local and school community to come together for a social day. Come on down to TMC Open Day. You won’t be disappointed!
by Year 3 Students